I would like to dedicate my special thanks to a beautiful lady called SJ @Sazzim on Twitter who very kindly presented this poem on her own blog back in January. Not only overflowing with kindness and encouragement, SJ was responsible for the beautiful presentation of this poem with accompanying images chosen with care. She kept me updated whenever lovely people had made some heartwarming comments, and she has given me a lot of encouragement to get my poems published. I won't forget this SJ, Huge Hug and love to you. Please check out the blog of SJ where you will find her wonderful ways with words and her brilliant poetry! I have so much admiration for gifted people like SJ who are willing to share their expertise and goodwill to encourage others who may not be as confident
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Lotsa love Mel XXXX
IN DREAMS
by Melanie Jay Narayanasamy
I hope, I pray that I’ll see you in dreams,
We’ll meet on top of a rainbow with smiles so wide!
Angels will play melodies, dressed in Heavenly creams
And down the rainbow we will slide
In dreams we will land on the softest, fluffiest cloud,
And we’ll discover that it’s made of the sweetest candy as we take it to our lips.
It will taste just like wedding cake, and remind us of all we vowed...
So hand in hand we’ll travel down Memory Lane with happy skips!
When we need a rest once our feet begin to ache,
We’ll sit on the Golden bench and give our Old Rainbow friend a wave!
Turning, we’ll find there flows the newest bluest clearest lake
And in dreams, we’ll decide there and then to have a bathe!
Your presence adds to the wondrous beauty of the water in every way you move,
As I join to you I realise that this was always meant to be- this so-called whim!
In dreams, even with loving splashes the Lake remains dignified and smooth,
Carrying our Love in a long and elegant swim
In dreams, the Lake ventures into the sea and we come to a tropical setting
Where golden sands bury hidden treasures and embrace the trees of palm,
Just like our Precious Paradise Lives on Earth, we’re never forgetting,
Where the Sun was your eyes and Gold were your arms
In dreams, you know it can’t last forever but the end is better without warning,
Because tears would ruin our Lake of Love and rust our Golden Seat,
We’d surely sink with heavy hearts a-mourning!
And a darkened sky would hide the Rainbow so how would we know where to meet?
That’s why only when I wake will I cry right until our next in-dream rendezvous,
I think next time I’ll ask you about Heaven and your Friend who sits on His Throne!
And I promise to store up all this Love I have for you
So that I can give it to you on that Rainbow high where the Angels have flown!
Being in dreams is what I hold on to because seeing you living gives me hope
To wish for this meeting place set in an unknown time in an unknown sphere
And one day Beloved, whence from this Earth I elope,
I’ll join you and close tightly shut the tap of this eternal tear
© Melanie Jay Narayanasamy 2011
very nice! i like this, great work :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks very much D.A. Thomas- I'm really happy that you like it :) This poem is going to be a year old soon and its very special to me!I worked quite hard on it to get it how it is and thoroughly enjoyed writing it. I appreciate you taking the time to read it and comment. With kind wishes Mel xxx
ReplyDeleteAnd thank you for very kindly following my blog D.A. Thomas :) That means a great deal! I hope you continue to enjoy the poems!
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